Score: 10

"Its... its"

submission: Legspin 2.0

date: August 1, 2009

its beautiful. :'o
So, beautiful.

Score: 10

"Aww"

submission: Guess Who's back!!

date: July 25, 2009

We missed you :3

Score: 9

"Hahaha"

submission: Bulbasaur tells a joke

date: July 25, 2009

That was funny :)

But I think you should ended it at the racist part the rest sorta killed it.

Score: 9

"Hey Archon watsup"

submission: Stop Cyberbullying!

date: July 25, 2009

Interesting game, but you shouldn't tell the player how to win. At least give me the satisfaction of figuring it out, even after I failed :c. I thought maybe if I called him enough names he would kill himself and I would win lol. Maybe make it give the message if you fail 2 or 3 times, or give them the option to see how to beat it with a button, on the fail page. And you shouldn't call me a moron, now I have to go kill myself :p

Also maybe make it so that the guy will respond after you send him a message, and if you don't send him any for maybe 5 seconds he'll start sending them to you, thinking that you are just trying to think of a response or something. Think of how he would send the messages if he was real. Also maybe make him have more typos and internet slang.

Anyways GET BACK TO WORK ON YOUR COLLAB PART >:(

Score: 9

"Some stuffs:"

submission: Virtual iPhone 3GS BETA 1

date: July 23, 2009

Add some good music. The music page is badly done. The 911 call should stop when you go home. You shouldn't make it automatically type in 911, there should be some #'s that if you call are easter eggs. And I don't know about i Phones, but on an iPod Touch, it just has a music button, not an iPod button. And the pictues and the buttons for the music are badly done, and dont fit with the rest. The Clock looks horrible. The safari is badly done, and shouldn't be playing flash movies. Switching pages is also badly done. Make them drag a small strip on the right side, not the corner, just the very right side of the flash.

And you should make the second page full of minigames, etc. as apps. Like one of those mafia wars rip off games, that are all over the app store. And make a bunch of minigames.And the apps don't just have to be games, stuff like the flashlight app, or 'Jared' (lol), the that;s what she said app, etc. It would take more effort, but it would really make the game better. This game is looking pretty good, and i want to sound like a dick, but saying 'So cool! Hahaha SO funny! This is SICK! LOLOLOL!' isn't gonna help you in anyway, except giving an ego boost. So yeah. :)

Score: 7

"It was okay"

submission: Llama Adventure

date: July 22, 2009

But you didn't use the usual commands in an Interactive Fiction, like x, or examine instead of look. And normally you could just type in look, and that would count as 'look around' or 'look room'. And its annoying how the game doesn't let you use commands like 'with', when an IF would normally just ignore the command. But I know how it would be really hard to code all the variations of the words and stuff in Flash, so points for creativity. I was making a game like this, so if I ever finish it, I hope people don't start saying I stole it :)

But in the end, this is no better than any other IF, but its original because its done in Flash, so yeah.
If you have an iPhone or iPod Touch, get the Frotz app (its free) and they have a bunch of IF's, and you can download more, so thats pretty cool. Not spamming my stuff or anything, just saying it has more games like this, but longer and more 'deep'. Anyways rock on :)

Score: 8

"Good"

submission: John Lennon vs The Horde

date: July 17, 2009

But not enough Beatles references, shouldn't Paul be there as a boss, he IS dead... And why isn't lucy in the sky, and I see no eggmen! So -2 >:(

Score: 6

"Very, Very Easy"

submission: Harald.

date: July 14, 2009

This was one of the easiest games i've ever played. Jumping let me get past everything with taking very little damage, and if you put nun at boat, any enemies chasing u just stop moving and you can kill them for some easy points. The end boss did no damage, and i started battling him with about 1/4 of my hp left, and was able to kill him by just standing where he was and keep whacking him. The dudes attack was delayed, so it was really annoying to kill the villagers at the begining. The game still had a nice concept, but enemies were basically the same, with the tiny difference being the big dudes who jump up and try to smash you. 3/5

Score: 10

"Sweet game im on Top 10 :D"

submission: OmgLasersPewPew

date: March 29, 2008

I got 281 I am currently # 10 on the Top 10 :)
Fun game, maybe add more types of enemies and powerups. Maybe even bosses? 10/10 5/5 :)

Score: 4

"Ok at best"

submission: Mystic Ball

date: March 15, 2008

It was just a bunch of random answers.
Thats like 5 lines of code.
You could just keep pressing enter, and just see what comes up.
And don't say i didnt play through the whole thing, i read them through, untl they just kept repeating.
Next time: Add more phrases. A lot more, you want to keep the person entertained for at least five minutes without repeating.
Make the plain 'yes' and 'no' answer more common.